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i was bored, so i made something up, sorry if sorry if story no good
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==History==The world of Aden is filled with many races, monsters, and angels. The monsters and some angels are what the people fear most are the Red Winged Angels. In the world of Aden there are humans, dwarfs, elf, dark elf, orcs, and angels. Within the angels race, there are three type of angels. The Light winged angels, the Dark winged angels, and the Red winged angels. Red winged angels are formed when angels kill anything that they come across as they are bathed in the blood of the slain people. Everyone fears the Red winged angels. They say the red winged angels are devils. In the past, the light angels and the dark angels had gone to war with each other. The reason is unknown, but the war still goes on. While the light and dark angels fight each other, the humans are fighting their own kind; the red winged angels waited for the right time to attack. The red winged angels hated all the other races for an unknown reason, but the humans think it is because they only want their race to be in the world, not any other race. So the red winged angels want all the other races to be destroyed. So one day the dark force did an all out attack on the light force fortress. While the battle was even, both sides were losing lots of troops and people, the red winged angels army flew down from the sky, and attacked both side as fast as the speed of sound, and hurt both sides badly. Then the red winged angels raided the human’s town and castle, and even wars, and damage the humans race and make the humans race lose hope. Now that the red winged angels have the upper hand, no one could stand up to them and stop them, as the red winged angels destroy town after town.==end of history==
There is a town name Dion, one day it came under attack by groups of red winged angels. The people tried to run for their lives as the guards took up arms and attacked the groups of red winged angels at the main gate. But then the main gate of Dion had fallen, and now the groups of red winged angels started to rush in and kill everything that moved. The inner town guards started to fight the red winged angels to make time for the people to escape. Then out of the mist, a woman came in running near the battle where you can see sword fighting and blood everywhere. She looked for her son, "Maximous! Where are you?!" yelled the woman. But there was yelling everywhere, dying, crying, fighting, you can't hear a thing, "Mom!! Help me!" yelled Maximous. Somehow she heard the voice of his mom and called for her. As the mother looked to the East where the voice coming from, she saw her son in the middle of the battle ground where the guards and red angels were fighting. The mother started to run to her son, as she almost got to her son, a red winged angel try to strike her with its swords. "Mom!! Look out!" yelled Maximous but the red winged angel strike got blocked by a guard and the woman fell to the group thinking she was going to die. "Hurry miss, go save your son, we will hold them until we die!" said the guard. The monther stood back up and made a sign of thank you and got to her son, as she took her son hand and run out of town into the forest. The battle at Dion became quiet. She knew that meant; all the guards had been slain, fighting for the people. The mother started to cry, but she knew it was no time for crying, so she started to run with her son again. As they ran, the mother heard something following them from behind. She looked back and there was a red winged angel following them. "You will not escape!" said the Red winged angel. But they did not stop and keep on running for their lives. The red winged angel pulled a throwing dagger out from a bag on his side and threw it at the mother. The dagger hit the mother on the back and she fall down to the ground, as the red winged angel flew to her and about to stab her with the sword, Maximous jumped on him and bite his hand, "Ouch, you are gonna die you stupid kid!" yelled the red winged angel. The mother got back up and started to run in pain, passing the forest. They saw a light, and came to the end of the forest and arrived at open grassland. The mother and Maximous started to run into the grassland, but the red winged angels came. However, now the red winged angel was not alone, he had friends and they flew at the mother and Maximous and surrounded them. Now the mother and Maximous were trapped, nowhere to run and no where to hide. One of the red winged angels ran in and hit the woman on her left side of her body and sent her flying onto the ground. "Mother!" yelled Maximous. The red angel stabbed her hand with a sword, she yelled in pain, blood rushed out and covered the ground near her hand. "Mother!!, Stop hurting her. I will not forgive you!!!" yelled Maximous. "You fool! Stop yelling or I am going to kill you!" yelled the red winged angel. "Stop hurting mother you stupid thing!", yelled Maximous. The red winged angel turned around and started walking to Maximous. "you young fool, go to hell!" yelled the red winged angel. He pulled out a sword and about to strike Maximous. An arrow from the west flew as fast as the speed of light and hit the red winged angel in the chest. The red winged angel fell to the ground lifeless.
The other red angels looked to where the arrow came from. There stood a dark elf male with a bow in his hands, and to his right is a light elf female mage, and to the left is a dwarf female warrior. "You will all die for hurting those two poor humans..." said the dark elf. The dwarf ran as fast as the wind and struck two of the red winged angels with her dual swords, named Sword of the underworld. The dwarf hit the two red winged angels so hard, that they fell to the ground so fast that the ground cracked open. Then the light elf began chanting some magic words. "God of the light, lend me the power to kill the evil that stands before me!" A lightning strike came down from the sky and hit the rest of the red winged angel that were standing near Maximous; all of them fell to the ground lifeless. As all the dust cleared, Maximous ran to his mother. "Mother, are you ok!?" yelled Maximous. He ran to her side and looked at her. "Maximous... I am sorry... I was not a good mother to you..." said the mother in her dying words. "No mother, you have been a good mother, so please don't die mother!" cried Maximous. Tears came from the mother’s eyes. "Maximous, you have been a good boy, and now you grow up to be a man, now go on and help save this world of Aden, I am sorry Maximous. Good bye my good son, you... will... always... be... in... my...hea..r...t..." said the dying mother. "Mother!!!" Maximous yelled so loud that the whole world of Aden may have heard it.
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interesting :)

i was bored, so i made something up, sorry if sorry if story no good
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==History==The world of Aden is filled with many races, monsters, and angels. The monsters and some angels are what the people fear most are the Red Winged Angels. In the world of Aden there are humans, dwarfs, elf, dark elf, orcs, and angels. Within the angels race, there are three type of angels. The Light winged angels, the Dark winged angels, and the Red winged angels. Red winged angels are formed when angels kill anything that they come across as they are bathed in the blood of the slain people. Everyone fears the Red winged angels. They say the red winged angels are devils. In the past, the light angels and the dark angels had gone to war with each other. The reason is unknown, but the war still goes on. While the light and dark angels fight each other, the humans are fighting their own kind; the red winged angels waited for the right time to attack. The red winged angels hated all the other races for an unknown reason, but the humans think it is because they only want their race to be in the world, not any other race. So the red winged angels want all the other races to be destroyed. So one day the dark force did an all out attack on the light force fortress. While the battle was even, both sides were losing lots of troops and people, the red winged angels army flew down from the sky, and attacked both side as fast as the speed of sound, and hurt both sides badly. Then the red winged angels raided the human’s town and castle, and even wars, and damage the humans race and make the humans race lose hope. Now that the red winged angels have the upper hand, no one could stand up to them and stop them, as the red winged angels destroy town after town.==end of history==
There is a town name Dion, one day it came under attack by groups of red winged angels. The people tried to run for their lives as the guards took up arms and attacked the groups of red winged angels at the main gate. But then the main gate of Dion had fallen, and now the groups of red winged angels started to rush in and kill everything that moved. The inner town guards started to fight the red winged angels to make time for the people to escape. Then out of the mist, a woman came in running near the battle where you can see sword fighting and blood everywhere. She looked for her son, "Maximous! Where are you?!" yelled the woman. But there was yelling everywhere, dying, crying, fighting, you can't hear a thing, "Mom!! Help me!" yelled Maximous. Somehow she heard the voice of his mom and called for her. As the mother looked to the East where the voice coming from, she saw her son in the middle of the battle ground where the guards and red angels were fighting. The mother started to run to her son, as she almost got to her son, a red winged angel try to strike her with its swords. "Mom!! Look out!" yelled Maximous but the red winged angel strike got blocked by a guard and the woman fell to the group thinking she was going to die. "Hurry miss, go save your son, we will hold them until we die!" said the guard. The monther stood back up and made a sign of thank you and got to her son, as she took her son hand and run out of town into the forest. The battle at Dion became quiet. She knew that meant; all the guards had been slain, fighting for the people. The mother started to cry, but she knew it was no time for crying, so she started to run with her son again. As they ran, the mother heard something following them from behind. She looked back and there was a red winged angel following them. "You will not escape!" said the Red winged angel. But they did not stop and keep on running for their lives. The red winged angel pulled a throwing dagger out from a bag on his side and threw it at the mother. The dagger hit the mother on the back and she fall down to the ground, as the red winged angel flew to her and about to stab her with the sword, Maximous jumped on him and bite his hand, "Ouch, you are gonna die you stupid kid!" yelled the red winged angel. The mother got back up and started to run in pain, passing the forest. They saw a light, and came to the end of the forest and arrived at open grassland. The mother and Maximous started to run into the grassland, but the red winged angels came. However, now the red winged angel was not alone, he had friends and they flew at the mother and Maximous and surrounded them. Now the mother and Maximous were trapped, nowhere to run and no where to hide. One of the red winged angels ran in and hit the woman on her left side of her body and sent her flying onto the ground. "Mother!" yelled Maximous. The red angel stabbed her hand with a sword, she yelled in pain, blood rushed out and covered the ground near her hand. "Mother!!, Stop hurting her. I will not forgive you!!!" yelled Maximous. "You fool! Stop yelling or I am going to kill you!" yelled the red winged angel. "Stop hurting mother you stupid thing!", yelled Maximous. The red winged angel turned around and started walking to Maximous. "you young fool, go to hell!" yelled the red winged angel. He pulled out a sword and about to strike Maximous. An arrow from the west flew as fast as the speed of light and hit the red winged angel in the chest. The red winged angel fell to the ground lifeless.
The other red angels looked to where the arrow came from. There stood a dark elf male with a bow in his hands, and to his right is a light elf female mage, and to the left is a dwarf female warrior. "You will all die for hurting those two poor humans..." said the dark elf. The dwarf ran as fast as the wind and struck two of the red winged angels with her dual swords, named Sword of the underworld. The dwarf hit the two red winged angels so hard, that they fell to the ground so fast that the ground cracked open. Then the light elf began chanting some magic words. "God of the light, lend me the power to kill the evil that stands before me!" A lightning strike came down from the sky and hit the rest of the red winged angel that were standing near Maximous; all of them fell to the ground lifeless. As all the dust cleared, Maximous ran to his mother. "Mother, are you ok!?" yelled Maximous. He ran to her side and looked at her. "Maximous... I am sorry... I was not a good mother to you..." said the mother in her dying words. "No mother, you have been a good mother, so please don't die mother!" cried Maximous. Tears came from the mother’s eyes. "Maximous, you have been a good boy, and now you grow up to be a man, now go on and help save this world of Aden, I am sorry Maximous. Good bye my good son, you... will... always... be... in... my...hea..r...t..." said the dying mother. "Mother!!!" Maximous yelled so loud that the whole world of Aden may have heard it.
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Does maximus become Knight Vadar in lineage 3? lol j/k it was very interesting yes.
It's a good start - but here are some ideas

Paragraphs. It's hard to read a huge chunk of text.

A new plot - This has got to be one of the oldest storylines. Ever. I predicted every single thing that happened.